Staring at what was unfolding before her, listening to her daughter’s words, Evelyn felt as if her heart was being shredded.
Tears welled up, blurring everything around her.
Luna was twisting the knife in her soul.
The dizzying joy of getting her daughter back—
Turns out, it was just fate playing a crueler joke.
Her Charlie was alive again.
But she didn’t recognize her as “Mom” anymore.
Worse—she looked at Evelyn as if she was the scariest villain in the world.
…
Charles hugged his daughter close, his big hand gently rubbing her back, trying to soothe her.
He’d dreamed of feeling her lean on him like this again.
But there was no happiness in his heart.
It was obvious—whatever happened to Charlie had Luna’s fingerprints all over it.
She did this to hurt Eve.
To make Charlie turn away from her real mother, to drive a wedge between them, and to have Charlie call the one person Eve despised most “Mom.”
It was pure poison.
Seeing the heartbreak on Evelyn’s face, Charles felt something in him crack.
Charlie was Eve’s whole world. She’d raised her on her own, pouring every ounce of love she had into that child.
Charlie meant more to her than life itself.
How much pain could one heart take?
Charles gently brushed back Charlie’s sweaty hair, his voice as soft as a whisper. “Charlie, sweetheart, you don’t have to be scared. She’s not a bad person—she’s your mom. She loves you more than anyone in the world.”
But Charlie shook her head, refusing to budge.
“She’s not! She’s NOT! I only have one mommy and that’s Luna!”
The more anyone tried to tell her otherwise, the more upset Charlie became.
…
Evelyn looked at her daughter, shattered and trembling.
She herself had just survived a brush with death.
Her body was weak, barely able to handle such an emotional storm.

He didn’t know the full story, but for Charlie, he’d move mountains.
…

Andrew gave Charlie a full check-up and found nothing physically wrong—she was just deeply distressed.

Andrew took the blood sample and headed straight for the lab, determined to figure out what was really wrong with Charlie.
…
After a long while under Charles’s soothing touch, Charlie finally drifted off to sleep again.
The moment he was sure she was resting, Charles wheeled himself to the door and pulled it open.
Evelyn had been waiting outside the whole time. The second she heard the door, her eyes shot toward Charlie’s bed, hungry for a glimpse.
She looked like she wanted nothing more than to run in, but she didn’t dare take a step.
Charles’s heart ached at the sight. Without thinking, he reached out and took Evelyn’s hand.
Her hand was ice-cold, and the feeling twisted something deep in his chest.

Comments
The readers' comments on the novel: The Day Our Promise Breaks (Charles and Evelyn)
I'm fed up with this novel eish...
What a bad novel. Evil deeds rules the entire story, no ending, villains characters succeed, no way out for the good people. I was hoping for better twists but disappointed again and again. Time close the book for me, no more, enough....
When will Evelyn's sufferings end? You mean to say evil rules the world? No longer funny, the twists are getting ridiculous....
Wow Finally! Thanks!...
More chapters please...