As Charles spoke and met her eyes, Charlie’s heart pounded so hard she thought it might burst.
She wanted to say yes.
But…
In the end, Charlie couldn’t meet the hope in Charles’s gaze. Her hand tightened around Evelyn’s, seeking comfort.
If she ever had to choose between her parents, she’d always pick her mom first.
Evelyn noticed every flicker in her daughter’s expression.
She felt Charlie’s grip tighten—a silent protest against a longing she was too scared to admit.
Evelyn’s heart softened.
She could see how much Charles had changed.
She knew he was genuinely sorry.
But the old wounds still ached.
Charlie, though, was just a kid.
She yearned for her dad’s love in a way that was impossible to hide.
If Charles could really be the father Charlie needed, if he could make up for the love she’d missed out on, Evelyn wouldn’t stand in the way.
Evelyn crouched down, gently cupping Charlie’s cheek, her voice as gentle as a whisper. “Charlie.”
Charlie looked up at her, nervous.
“Mom, I…”
“Sweetheart, do what your heart wants. Don’t worry about me. All I want is for you to be happy.”
Charlie stared into her mother’s warm, loving eyes.
“Mom, I love you. I love you the most.”
She wrapped her arms around Evelyn’s neck, snuggling into her shoulder like she’d done a thousand times before.
Evelyn couldn’t help kissing her daughter’s soft cheek.
Charles overheard, and the look in his eyes burned even brighter.
Was Evelyn really trying to forgive him? Is that why she was letting Charlie reach out?
Evelyn caught his gaze but pretended she didn’t, offering no response.



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The readers' comments on the novel: The Day Our Promise Breaks (Charles and Evelyn)
I'm fed up with this novel eish...
What a bad novel. Evil deeds rules the entire story, no ending, villains characters succeed, no way out for the good people. I was hoping for better twists but disappointed again and again. Time close the book for me, no more, enough....
When will Evelyn's sufferings end? You mean to say evil rules the world? No longer funny, the twists are getting ridiculous....
Wow Finally! Thanks!...
More chapters please...